Tuesday Poem: seventy by Hinemoana Baker

Jul 19 2010

Seventy
                                         seventy - painting by Kirsty Morison

 

Everything is so tender.

Which is kidney, which is steak

or mushroom?

 

It’s the best sleep she’s had in years

this latest hospital stay of his.

She stands in her sunroom

 

practises her choreography

in her blue dressing gown

my mother points to the sky

 

sings I’m goin’ nowhere

somebody help me

somebody help me get there.

 

*

 

On the table

seventy roses in a vase.

Under my feet a mat

 

crocheted from plastic bags.

A silver balloon on a stick

droops in a bunch

 

of dusty plastic hydrangeas.

My clothes are laid out

drying on furniture

 

like shadows of us all.

I think of her

eleven years old

 

how she ran to beat the rain

the road wettening

in lashes behind her.

 

*

 

In the last mouthful of stew

there’s a walnut.

She tells me that Stan

 

makes bacon from stingray wings

how he cures it and you’d never

ever know.

 

Hinemoana Baker is a writer and musician living on Wellington’s Kapiti Coast. Born in Christchurch, she has travelled widely, and was 2009 Arts Queensland Poet in Residence. Her first book, published jointly by VUP and in the US by Perceval Press, was matuhi | needle.

Hinemoana's writing has been published in anthologies and in the online literary journal 'Turbine' (2002, 2003, 2004, 2007). Her popular poem 'A Walk With Your Father' was chosen for 'Best New Zealand Poems 2004', the love poem 'One' for 'Best New Zealand Poems 2006' and 'Last Born' for 'Best New Zealand Poems 2008'.

Her new book 'koiwi koiwi' (bone bone) was launched to much deserved acclaim on Sunday night at the Ballroom cafe in Newtown, Wellington. I might be a little biased. Hinemoana is an old friend and the poem I've chosen began it's life as part of the 'Kissed' collaboration we did together. However, I just love that opening stanza, the leap from tenderness - which in a poem is not usually about steak and kidney. And all the other leaps she takes in the poem that suprise and delight me all the way through.

Hinemoana says:

The poem 'seventy' misquotes The Bee Gees' 'Saturday Night Fever'. It also misquotes my mother. It wasn't Stan, she reminded me. It was John. Sorry John.

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Belinda

Thank you for posting this poem - it's so beautifully detailed and so well paced.

Tim Jones

Thanks for posting this, Helen! I really enjoyed this poem, and I enjoyed the launch a lot too - although I had to scoot at the end, because I was running quite late by then. I want to track down Teresia's CD and/or book, too - it was a treat to hear her read, and to hear her and Hinemoana perform together. (In fact, all the performances were fantastic.)

Bill

Awesome!

maggie r-s

I think Stan is a great name for John - and I tasted that walnut... I shall interrogate my butcher next week about his bacon. Lovely poem.